7 Common Website Content Mistakes: Habits to Avoid When Writing Your Business’ Site

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Most owners who ask how to write good website content for your small business are really asking what to leave out. The answer is shorter than you’d think. Say what you do, where you do it and how to reach you, in the words you’d use at the counter. Everything else is optional.

We see the same seven habits on a lot of small business websites in Montgomery and Bucks County. Most are easy to fix once you can spot them.

Your visitor has a problem and other tabs open

Someone lands on your site because a neighbor mentioned you, or because they searched for a service and you came up. They have a problem, a few minutes, and a couple of other companies open in other tabs.

They want four things answered. Can you help? Do you work near me? Why should I trust you? How do I reach you? If the page answers those fast, you have a fair chance at the call. The rest of the words are there for the people who stay.

How to write good website content for your small business

You don’t need to be a writer. You need to answer what a customer would ask you in person. Each habit below is a way of drifting from that.

Habit one: Writing a book instead of a website

Everything you know about your trade doesn’t belong on the home page, however proud of it you are. A home page that tries to say everything ends up saying nothing a stranger can find. Some of it belongs on a service page, some in the conversation after they call, and some nowhere.

The research here is old, and still the standard reference. In Nielsen Norman Group’s 2008 analysis “How Little Do Users Read?”, users had time to read at most 28% of the words on an average web page, and 20% was more likely. The data came from 25 people browsing in 2005, so treat the exact figure with care. The point holds up. A visitor reads a fraction of what you write, and that fraction should include what you do and how to reach you.

Habit two: Talking about yourself

Licenses, years in business and equipment matter. But a list of facts isn’t help. “We have decades of experience” is about you. “We’ll tell you whether the unit is worth repairing before you spend a dollar” is about them. Most of the page should read as if you were glad they walked in. Try a plain test: count how often the page says “we” and how often it says “you”. If “we” wins by a mile, the page is talking to itself.

Habit three: Skipping the proofread

It seems unfair that a typo on a fence builder’s site should say anything about the fence. But a stranger has very little to go on, and a careless page becomes part of the evidence.

Read each page out loud before it goes live, then hand it to someone else. Out loud is where you catch the sentence that runs on, the service you renamed last year and the phone number with two digits swapped. Check the facts as well as the spelling. We often find a business has moved, changed hours or added services without the site catching up. Then look at the page on a phone. If you aren’t sure what to look for, here’s how to tell if your website is mobile-friendly.

Habit four: Writing for everyone

A pest control company has two very different readers. A property manager wants to know about contracts, reports and response times. A homeowner with wasps under the porch roof wants to know whether someone can come tomorrow. One page rarely serves both.

Pick the customer you want more of. What do they call their problem, and what makes them hesitate on the first call? Write to that person, even if the page isn’t for everyone.

Habit five: Burying the answer

Picture a garage door company in Harleysville. It’s early morning, a spring has snapped, and the car is stuck inside. If the repair page opens with the company’s history and its philosophy of customer care, the visitor still doesn’t know whether anyone can come today. Open with what you fix, where, and the phone number.

Here’s a quick test. Read only the first two sentences of each page. Would a stranger know what’s offered and what to do next?

Habit six: Decorating instead of informing

A photo of your crew on a job, a before and after, or a plain comparison of two service plans carries information faster than text. A stock photo of a handshake carries none. For each image, ask what the visitor learns from it. If the answer is nothing, the page reads better without it.

Habit seven: Claiming quality without showing any

“Quality work” and “trusted by the community” are easy to write, and visitors skim past them. Don’t make a claim you can’t support.

Customers go looking for support whether you offer it or not. In BrightLocal’s Local Consumer Review Survey 2026, 97% of the 1,002 US adults surveyed said they read reviews online, and 49% said they trust online reviews as much as personal recommendations. That’s consumers in general and not your customers, but it points at where proof on your site should come from. Reviews, testimonials, photos of finished jobs and short case studies all give a visitor something to judge. If you say you work on older homes, show one. We’ve covered what to include in a business website in a separate checklist.

What good website content can’t do

Clear content helps the people who reach your site decide whether to contact you. It doesn’t bring them there. That depends on search visibility, your Google Business Profile, advertising and referrals, and how long search improvements take depends on your starting point and your competition. No one controls how many calls a rewritten page produces, and we won’t promise a number.

It also depends on you. Nobody outside the business knows which jobs you want more of, which questions customers keep asking, or which projects you’re proud of. When we write message and service pages as part of our website design work, we need that from the owner, plus photos, and later your view on whether the inquiries are the right kind.

Check one page this week

Pick your most important service page and read the first two sentences out loud. If a stranger couldn’t tell what you offer and how to reach you, rewrite those two sentences. It takes about fifteen minutes and costs nothing.

Then show us the site and tell us what kind of business you want it to bring in. We’ll say what we’d change and why. Your first consultation is free. You can send us a message or call (215) 368-8900.